daamini aaj 70 baras ki ho gai hai.
subah subah hi ghar ki saaf safai kar, naha dho kar vo 5 roti pakati hai.
2 apne liye, 3 ramu ko khilati hai. ramu ek mahine ka hi tha jab daamini ka pota jaane kaha se utha laaya tha use. daamini akele rehte hue apna khayal hi mushkil se rakh pati hai, ek haath me itna dard rehta hai ke boodhi aankho se aansu nikal de. to ramu ko sada hi khaded deti thi. par us chote se kutte ne apni maasumiat se maano daamini ka man moh lia tha. ab us ghar me daamini ke sath ramu bhi rehne laga hai.
vaise daamini ke do bete hain.
dono apni grihasti me aise ja base hain, ke jaise daamini se ab unka koi vasta hi nahi. apne pote ki aawaz sun-ne ko daamini kabhi kabhar phone to ghuma deti hai, pas vahan kisi ke paas kahan waqt hai ke daamini se baat kar lein. aakhir kaun sune uski shikayaton ki lambi fehrist. kaun uski yaadon me unka haath pakad ke sair kare. kaun uska toota radio banwaye ya chashma theek karwaye.
us din raamu ko daamini ne roti khilane ke baad ghoom ke aane ke liye darwaze ke bahar kiya. shaam ke char baj gaye, raamu ka aaj koi thikana hi na tha.
daamini ne ek baat fir socha ke beto se baat kar le, to thoda dhyan bhatke. roz ki tarah, aaj bhi unke pas samay na tha. apni 'rangeen' zindagy me, maa ka janamdin bhi vo bhool gaye.
daamini ko koi aascharya na tha.
vo bas raamu ka intezaar karne lagi.
paanch bajne ko they. achanak daamini ne uske bhoonkne ki aawaz suni. ramu ne roni si shakal bana ke use yun dekha maano maafi maang raha ho. daamini ki aankho se aansu tapak pade. usne raamu ko khoob daanta. thappad bhi laga diya gusse me. raamu daamini ke peeche peeche dum hilate hue chalta raha. daamini ne fir use god me utha ke gale se laga liya. us din vo khoob roi. itna ke laga bas saare aansu ab sookh gaye hain.
us din ke baad daamini ke beto ke ghar fir kabhi uska phona na aaya.
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ReplyDeleteit is a very nice and sweet emotional piece, but i feel you lose thread in the middle...have more control of the story. the concept is very good but the execution should be better...
aye aye dada
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